Analysing Language in Prose

📖 English Years 9–11 Higher

Master close reading: examine a writer's word choices and devices to explain the precise effects they create.

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Close analysis of language is the heart of Literature study. It means slowing down to ask why a writer chose this word, image or sound, and what effect it has on the reader.

Why this matters The highest marks reward precise comment on language, not general praise. Knowing the devices by name and explaining their effect on the reader turns 'the description is vivid' into genuine analysis.

Word choice: diction and connotation

Diction is a writer's choice of words. Every word carries connotation, the feelings and ideas attached to it. 'Slim' and 'scrawny' both mean thin, but their connotations differ sharply. Verbs matter most: 'she crept' and 'she strode' paint opposite characters.

Imagery and figurative language

Sound and sentences

Sound devices shape mood: alliteration repeats initial sounds ('the silent, slinking shadow'); onomatopoeia imitates sounds ('crash', 'hiss'). Sentence structure matters too, a short sentence after long ones lands like a blow.

The method: PEE

Analyse using Point, Evidence, Explanation. Make a point about the writer's method, quote briefly as evidence, then explain the effect, ideally zooming in on a single key word. Always tie the effect back to meaning or feeling: say what the language does to the reader and why the writer might want that. The strongest answers explore alternative readings of a word ('perhaps it also suggests...') and comment on the cumulative effect of several devices working together. Avoid vague praise such as 'this makes it interesting'; instead, be precise about the picture, sound or emotion the language creates. Close reading rewards patience: read slowly, notice the unexpected word, and ask why the writer reached for it rather than a plainer one. Over time this careful attention becomes second nature.

Same meaning, opposite effect

Connotation is where the analysis marks live. Two words can share a dictionary meaning and pull the reader in opposite directions.

PairWhat they shareWhat they suggest
slim / scrawnyBoth mean thinSlim flatters; scrawny suggests weakness or neglect
crept / strodeBoth mean walkedCrept paints fear or stealth; strode paints confidence

Verbs carry the most weight — change the verb and you change the character.

Naming the device

DeviceHow it worksExample
SimileCompares using like or asbrave as a lion
MetaphorSays one thing is anotherthe classroom was a zoo
PersonificationGives human traits to non-human thingsthe wind whispered
ImageryAppeals to the senses to paint a picturethe crisp, cold morning

Match each example to its device:

the classroom was a zoo
Metaphor
brave as a lion
Simile
the wind whispered
Personification
Common exam mistake: Vague praise such as "this makes it interesting" or "this creates a good effect" without saying what the effect actually is. Precision matters: name the exact picture, sound or emotion the language creates in the reader's mind.
Exam technique: Zoom in on a single word within your quotation rather than explaining a whole sentence at once. Exploring the connotations of one carefully chosen word, such as why "crept" was chosen over "walked", produces sharper, higher-scoring analysis than a broad general comment.
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